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Turtle_freek...NJ
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theese poems are NOT about turtles i couldnt think of anything to write so....well i thought u might like them..tell me what you think (im still not that good am i) If you like them i can give you another one each week or so.... :P

The sound of children\'s laughter
Drifting through the air,
Reaching up to the heavens,
As they sit there without a care,

When your young you dont
Understand the fine line there
is between life and death,

When someone passes
Away you done think twice
About it, that\'s only because
You dont understand,

If they\'re dying from a disease,
You dont care because you dont
Understand,

You dont understand
Why your parents cry every time
You bring up the subject,
You dont understand why
You parents leave all the time,

That\'s because you dont
Understand,

When you finally get to
go see that person in
The giant whit hospital bed,
You dont think anything of it,
You dont know what\'s wrong with
Them nor do you care,
That\'s because you dont
Understand

But when you finally do
Understand...it will be too late,
That person will have passed,
While the sorrow wraps its self
Around you swallowing you hole,

You\'ll finally think....of what was
Really going on while you parents
Said you grandpa was on vacation
And decided to never come back......


ONE MORE

Angle wings were shown today but not a cry was heard, a spirit silently slipping away from this happyness filled world, the portal to heaven is opening and closing throught and through god doesnt know what to do, to take the beloved person for himself or keep them here with you, tears were shed on that day as there the person lay, thoughts and memories stull live on but you\'ll miss that person is what you dawn, you feel like you cant move on, hopeless and empty, ridded from all there is to feel nothing seems real, you want to wake up from this horrible dream, to cry your tears, to finally end this dream, a blinding light you see so near, you lose your voice because of fear, the silent spirit you held so near, lifting once again back to life, you whipe the tears from your eyes in suttle and utter suprise, god had made up his mind and gave in to his own demands, you look back on the place they once rest and you know that you were truly blessed.

Tell me what you think :)
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da da da da da well no1 is replying so i guess they hate them
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do do do do do wells no one is replying hummmm
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You\'ve heard from me before, so you know I like the poem. Since no one else is replying I decided to take the liberty to do it myself!
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lol thanks did u get my e-mail?
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Yeah I did and I already sent one back!
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