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STRAYKINGFISHER Level 5


Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 3140 Location: Bryan, TEXAS
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Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 6:51 pm Post subject: **POEM**LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK :D |
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--------------------------------------------------------------THE HUNTER-----------------------------------------------------------------
MY PREY IS THE MOST ELUSIVE THING IN THE WORLD, MANY PEOPLE HAVE BEEN BITTEN BY IT, IT LEAVES NO MARKS ON THE SKIN, SO NO ONE ELSE WOULD KNOW THAT THE PERSON HAS BEEN BITTEN.
IT IS VERY HARD TO FIND BECAUSE IT TAKES MANY FORMS SO IT IS NOT EASY TO SPOT, YOU COULD WALK RIGHT BY IT WITHOUT KNOWING IT, OR IT COULD BE STARING YOU IN THE FACE WITHOUT YOU REALIZING IT.
SOME PEOPLE GO THEIR WHOLE LIFE WITHOUT EVER CATCHING EVEN A GLIMPSE, OTHERS THAT JUST PLAIN GIVE UP ON EVER FINDING IT, AND YET OTHERS THAT JUST PLAIN DON’T CARE TO EVEN LOOK FOR IT.
I HAVE HUNTED IT ALL OF MY LIFE, BUT, I AM NOT THE ONLY HUNTER, MANY PEOPLE HUNT IT AS WELL, BUT THIS THING IS VERY HARD TO FIND, AND THOSE WHO DO SUCCEED IN GETTING A HOLD OF IT SOON FIND OUT THAT CATCHING IT IS EASIER THAN KEEPING IT, ALL IT NEEDS IS A MOMENT OF NEGLECT FOR IT TO SPREAD ITS WINGS AND TAKE FLIGHT.
I HAVE NOT HAD VERY GOOD LUCK IN GETTING A HOLD OF IT, I HAVE COME CLOSE AT TIMES, BUT I HAVE LOST SIGHT OF IT, IT ALWAYS SEEMS TO BE JUST OUT OF REACH.
BUT LATELY IT SEEMS THAT I HAVE FINALLY TRACKED IT DOWN, I HAVE TO TREAD CAREFULLY SO AS NOT TO SCARE IT AWAY, WISH ME LUCK, I AM GOING IN.....
AHH LOVE, FINALLY , IT TOOK FOR EVER TO FIND YOU, BUT IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------BY: STRAYKINGFISHER _________________

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Cyn Level 2


Joined: 05 Jun 2006 Posts: 31 Location: Worcester, MA
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Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 7:28 pm Post subject: |
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WOW! That was one of the best poems I have ever read!!! And it was full of nothing but the truth!!! _________________
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STRAYKINGFISHER Level 5


Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 3140 Location: Bryan, TEXAS
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Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 11:34 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks, I get lucky every once in a while, I worked on that for a few months, mostly because I don't have much time and when I do have it, I am usually too tired to think  _________________
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reptileman Level 4


Joined: 27 Jul 2004 Posts: 1174
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 10:36 am Post subject: |
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Wow! Spoken like a true poet. | Quote: | | IT IS VERY HARD TO FIND BECAUSE IT TAKES MANY FORMS SO IT IS NOT EASY TO SPOT, YOU COULD WALK RIGHT BY IT WITHOUT KNOWING IT, OR IT COULD BE STARING YOU IN THE FACE WITHOUT YOU REALIZING IT. |
That's my favorite line. _________________ The force is strong with my RES, Charleston. Koi is my next step. |
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dixieee Level 5


Joined: 14 Sep 2004 Posts: 6120 Location: The Lost Desert
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 11:04 am Post subject: |
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hey stray i just saw that post-->well after u noted to it..
| Quote: | | ALL IT NEEDS IS A MOMENT OF NEGLECT FOR IT TO SPREAD ITS WINGS AND TAKE FLIGHT. |
yeah some things in this life shouldn't be denied..
it came in the right time for me to understand, good luck buddy _________________ Wed 10/27/2004 is the worst day..i lost my best friend Leo
so now i have a female RES, Green, and a cute stupid male YBS, Mint
5/4/2006 RIP Lemon, u were my first rescue and i'm so proud of u. will never 4get u |
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STRAYKINGFISHER Level 5


Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 3140 Location: Bryan, TEXAS
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 7:05 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks guys, I am very glad you like
it, My muse was with me that day,
usually she just lays around doing nothing  _________________
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trtlduv Level 4


Joined: 06 Jan 2006 Posts: 678 Location: Idaho Falls, Idaho
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 1:51 pm Post subject: |
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WOW! That is a truly amazing poem, Stray!! Quite a talent you've got there!  _________________ shade & sweetwater! |
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STRAYKINGFISHER Level 5


Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 3140 Location: Bryan, TEXAS
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 6:18 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you very much  _________________
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turtleman1 Level 3


Joined: 18 Jan 2005 Posts: 210 Location: kentucky
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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i aint going to lie to u at first i thought it was bad cuz i didnt no what it was about but as i read it more and more i started likeing it and found out what it was about so over all 4 1/2 of 5 stars  _________________ your religion is what you live by. paintball is what you live for! |
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turtleman1 Level 3


Joined: 18 Jan 2005 Posts: 210 Location: kentucky
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:02 pm Post subject: |
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o ya ur titles not centered  _________________ your religion is what you live by. paintball is what you live for! |
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STRAYKINGFISHER Level 5


Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 3140 Location: Bryan, TEXAS
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 7:43 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks, and the title was centered when I cut and pasted from Microsoft Word, the text doesn't usually stay the way it is supposed to be, it took me a while to put my signature on it.  _________________
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centex Level 3

Joined: 21 Aug 2005 Posts: 319
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Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 12:32 am Post subject: |
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| great poem skf!!!! |
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Pugitheeslider Level 1

Joined: 17 Jul 2006 Posts: 14 Location: 1545 S. New Hampshire Ave.
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Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 2:43 pm Post subject: |
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aweeeesome. (:
nice poetic skills you've got there. _________________ Hello, i am a owner of a red- eared slider, and i had experienced several problems and questions thats why i signed up! (: |
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STRAYKINGFISHER Level 5


Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 3140 Location: Bryan, TEXAS
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Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 7:55 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you, Thank you all (Takes a bow while blushing)  _________________
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